I'm yours

Author: MysterydarkPoet ASL Info:    20/f/Aust Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173 Words: 34

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I'm yours

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Expanding blue beauty Won't you look at me? Calm and soothingly Entice me in, & Swallow me whole- Taste my hurt & filth. Cradle my love & will. I'm yours,  If anyones at all.

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