This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17.
It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different.
All content will be deleted. Backup anything important.
--- Staff
Roleplay Cloud -
 

  Off

Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password
Roleplay | Viral news today | Music Theory

I'm yours


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 34
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 1441
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 255



Description:



I'm yours


Expanding blue beauty
Won't you look at me?
Calm and soothingly
Entice me in,
& Swallow me whole-
Taste my hurt & filth.
Cradle my love & will.
I'm yours, 
If anyones at all. 




Submitted on 2010-03-27 04:25:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments



Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?		7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



184041

EliteSkills

  Roleplay
  Top News