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    dots Submission Name: Immunitydots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1089/408/117
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 612
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       Here I go again trying to make sense of it all when there really is no realistic conclusion to be had


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    dotsImmunitydots
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    Exuberant ecstatic rapture
    Sardonic denigrating quip
    Joisting up an oaken rafter
    The cabin of a sailing ship

    Lucid eloquent recumbence
    Surreal retrospective grace
    Endless ocean's myriad turbulence
    Infinity would set its pace

    Imbue spontaneous induction
    Exude efficient transience
    Exhort the mystic symbiotic construction
    For the course of our intransigence

    Litigant ludicrous licentiousness
    Coquettish audacious impunity
    Lecherous libidos atrocious impertinence
    Would pound id's shore horrendously

    Derisive subjugated nuance
    Extol intrinsic unity
    Nebulous wisps of shaded quiescence
    With breeze and sky make harmony

    Predilect effluent effusion
    Tenacious taubla tapestry
    Alleviate the torrential confusion
    Acquire efficience for flights symmetry




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      Perhaps I am just being lazy and asked to think when I am trying to relax. I do fear that I'll have to look up some meanings in some cases nevertheless.
    | Posted on 2010-09-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a collection of ponderous words which generate difficulty in the reading not to mention understanding. Perhaps it is an exercise in such practice? At least that's what I think the previous comment also meant to say.
    | Posted on 2010-09-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      I wonder where the borders lie, for eloquence and understanding, but me, not being native English, can make little sense of this; your point thus is misunderstood, and I wonder whether that was your intent.
    | Posted on 2010-07-22 00:00:00 | by Urisen | [ Reply to This ]


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