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Author: monad
ASL Info:    64/M/California
Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092 /410 /117
Words: 208
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Here I go again trying to make sense of it all when there really is no realistic conclusion to be had


Exuberant ecstatic rapture
Sardonic denigrating quip
Joisting up an oaken rafter
The cabin of a sailing ship

Lucid eloquent recumbence
Surreal retrospective grace
Endless ocean's myriad turbulence
Infinity would set its pace

Imbue spontaneous induction
Exude efficient transience
Exhort the mystic symbiotic construction
For the course of our intransigence

Litigant ludicrous licentiousness
Coquettish audacious impunity
Lecherous libidos atrocious impertinence
Would pound id's shore horrendously

Derisive subjugated nuance
Extol intrinsic unity
Nebulous wisps of shaded quiescence
With breeze and sky make harmony

Predilect effluent effusion
Tenacious taubla tapestry
Alleviate the torrential confusion
Acquire efficience for flights symmetry

Submitted on 2010-03-27 06:05:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Perhaps I am just being lazy and asked to think when I am trying to relax. I do fear that I'll have to look up some meanings in some cases nevertheless.
| Posted on 2010-09-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a collection of ponderous words which generate difficulty in the reading not to mention understanding. Perhaps it is an exercise in such practice? At least that's what I think the previous comment also meant to say.
| Posted on 2010-09-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  I wonder where the borders lie, for eloquence and understanding, but me, not being native English, can make little sense of this; your point thus is misunderstood, and I wonder whether that was your intent.
| Posted on 2010-07-22 00:00:00 | by Urisen | [ Reply to This ]

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