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    dots Submission Name: Front Porch Blasphemy, why you might ask?dots

    Author: colbybradshaw
    ASL Info:    24,deep south, u.s
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 19/19/29
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsFront Porch Blasphemy, why you might ask?dots

    Green eyes,
    on the front porch,
    and debauchery,
    please kiss me,
    wait dont,
    i dont know,
    Bible belt beasties,
    eat at my heart thumps,
    Oft has the jabberwocky,
    no wait......,
    Blast the cigarettes,
    and light up the speakers,
    of verities,
    the secret lives of spleen,
    mechanical handshake,
    when all i wanted was to embrace your frame,
    feel the warmth of your bones,
    the cracking sinews,
    of our arms intertwined,
    envelopes of flesh,
    covered in stamps,
    and never mailed,
    Charon curses the postal service,
    he cringes under the anonymity of demi god hood,
    while i?,
    I sit idly by watching the stream,
    of consciousness esplanade,
    the shopkeepers curse my name,
    they call me,
    the thief who pays,
    golden teeth and the decrepit fatherhood,
    plagiarism that borders on,
    all of this,
    and more can be yours,
    for just three easy.......,
    Built in depth charges help protect,
    the nucleus,

    television flashback,
    fated vaccum tube copulation,
    images of dimly lit,
    teletronic dreamscapes,
    the trees droop,
    the windows close of their own accord,
    and I fall in love with the shadow of my sleeping mind,
    as the tombstones blow in the wind.

    Submitted on 2010-03-28 18:39:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      'envelopes of flesh,
    covered in stamps,
    and never mailed'

    that's just great!

    i have always enjoyed streams. maybe because they always border on odd, quirky, and (insert a whole bunch of other [censored] here).

    what lurks in a mind's mind is always fascinating to me. in the sense that nonsense makes sense and none at all.

    i really like how one thought kind of leads to the next in a sort of ranty but not kind of way.

    interesting to say the least.

    i enjoyed.

    | Posted on 2010-03-30 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]

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