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    dots Submission Name: Straightjacket ( Strait Jacket )dots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsStraightjacket ( Strait Jacket )dots
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    I am a sane man
    Living in a totally insane world

    I am in hospital now
    They say
    I am insane

    I only have one statement to make in my defense

    Do you think it is rational
    Or sane
    To live as if you are completely and utterly
    Divorced
    Separated
    And not a part of
    The
    Rest
    Of
    Creation

    ???

    ( and they tell me Im crazy )






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