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    dots Submission Name: Lostdots
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    Author: gothgirl101
    ASL Info:    18/F/Pelham,AL
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 10/41/17
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 564
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    dotsLostdots
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    You find yourself lost and alone,
    Far away from your family and home.

    You don't know when or how you got there,
    You look up around you and give a blank stare.

    There's nothing around you but a bottomless pit,
    You think to yourself, "This could take a while, I might as well sit.."

    Thinking back to what you've done wrong,
    It all falls into rhythm just like a song.

    When life gives you lemons make lemonade,
    You're always suppose to love and never hate!
    If this is you who I'm talking to,
    Never give up hope, It'll come to you soon!




    Submitted on 2010-03-29 12:26:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great work! Very inspiring. I really needed that right now, thanks.

    Buster
    | Posted on 2010-04-07 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      actually some fine meter here keeps the poem moving along very nice indeed! So good rhyme, really nice work!!!!
    | Posted on 2010-04-07 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      hi this has a great message for people who lack certain needs
    i like this alot because it can mean nothing to someone but a powering thought for someone else
    well done i hope you get lots of reads on this

    sandman
    | Posted on 2010-03-29 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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