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    dots Submission Name: Painful Possession dots
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    Author: LyntS
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    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsPainful Possession dots
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    I condemn my sins,
    I replenish my pain,
    I lived my life,
    now
    help me to use it.

    Time is of the essence
    Love is making everything into lessons
    Why the pain, why the furry
    Why me

    U ask me to wait
    I try to negotiate
    No acceptance
    No commitment

    Iím troubled
    You say u love me
    Now u loved me
    Why the deference

    I thought I knew you
    I thought you knew me
    But all you did was show me:
    Nobody owns me




    Submitted on 2010-03-30 12:29:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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