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    dots Submission Name: I Know Who I Lovedots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI Know Who I Lovedots
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    I know who I love

    These words I mutter to you
    As I watch the way you work
    The way you do what you do
    You see it, you take it
    And then it is all yours
    And I know who I love

    These words I scribble down
    As I listen to the way you speak
    Iíve had the worst of times
    Now I want the best of them
    Take me, Iím yours
    I know who I love

    But now youíre gone
    And youíve slipped through
    And yet again
    Iím left with just a picture of you.




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