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    dots Submission Name: Illusions: My take on "The Futurist"dots
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    Author: LRRolins
    ASL Info:    17/A/A world you dont own
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 142/140/84
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 772
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2016



    Description:
       Once again,school project stuff. Anyway,this is my written intrepretation of one of my favourite songs,"the Futurist", by Robert Downing Jr. Thoughts?


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    dotsIllusions: My take on "The Futurist"dots
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    You're more than a shape;you're defined.
    The only one there: I see you so clearly through this glass.
    Oh,how I love the saucy tand of mankind,
    especially when you croon away the season's crass.

    Like Spring and Winter's embrace
    Till death do us part
    Circling with the vultures isn't my place
    Don't chance your precious heart

    They'll go together
    and we'll educate this lonely world
    All of this feels so familiar like the changing Fall
    Only a true illusionist knows
    every slick trick we've got

    Lay yourself into my waiting hands
    Let me drown in your precious wine
    God,I love it when you take on my all.
    I love it when you bind me by your twine

    Like Spring and Winter's embrace
    Till death do us part
    Circling with the vultures isn't my place
    Don't chance your precious heart

    They'll go together
    and we'll educate this lonely world
    All of this feels so familiar like the changing Fall
    Onlyu a true illusionist knows
    every slick trick we've got

    Pregnant;
    there's something prolific, a venturing entity
    So many colours,
    where is the whole of it all?

    Like Spring and Winter's embrace
    Till death do us part
    Circling,never
    Look into your heart

    They'll go together
    (and we'll educate this lonely world)
    and we'll educate this lonely world
    All of this feels so familiar like the changing Fall
    (we'll clain it all)
    Only a true illusionist knows
    every slick trick we've got
    every single one we've got
    (allow me one more word)
    every single one we've got

    And look how it still goes on
    Hey!
    Never alone anymore




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