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    dots Submission Name: A Story of Lovedots
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    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 214/184/78
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 444
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 663



    Description:
       This isn't finished yet.. The first two stanzas are verses and the third is the chorus.. It is a country love song..


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    dotsA Story of Lovedots
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    They say love doesn't grow on trees
    for just anyone to go out and pick it,
    can't put it in your pocket
    or string it 'round your neck,
    but baby in your eyes I can see it;

    Now life has a complicated way
    of puttin' two and two together,
    but if you come up with five
    you better stop and realize,
    babe there ain't nothin' can fix it;

    So i'll leave a smile on your pillow
    and a kiss by your footboard,
    a note to say that I need your love;
    So baby take my note
    and wrap it up tight
    and hold it close to your heart;




    Submitted on 2010-03-30 21:13:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it, and I do like country music (ok, maybe that's an understatement). I think it's really sweet, and fits in with the country pop thats coming out right now. Nice start so far, and welcome back :)

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2010-04-02 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      I’m not much a country fan but I do listen every once and a while and from the way it looks, it looks good. Lol, I kinda gave it my own country jingle when I read it to see how it sound and it fits really well. I wouldn’t mind reading it again when you’re finished.


    Faid
    | Posted on 2010-03-31 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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