[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: A Story of Lovedots

    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 214/184/78
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 452
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 663

       This isn't finished yet.. The first two stanzas are verses and the third is the chorus.. It is a country love song..

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA Story of Lovedots

    They say love doesn't grow on trees
    for just anyone to go out and pick it,
    can't put it in your pocket
    or string it 'round your neck,
    but baby in your eyes I can see it;

    Now life has a complicated way
    of puttin' two and two together,
    but if you come up with five
    you better stop and realize,
    babe there ain't nothin' can fix it;

    So i'll leave a smile on your pillow
    and a kiss by your footboard,
    a note to say that I need your love;
    So baby take my note
    and wrap it up tight
    and hold it close to your heart;

    Submitted on 2010-03-30 21:13:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      I like it, and I do like country music (ok, maybe that's an understatement). I think it's really sweet, and fits in with the country pop thats coming out right now. Nice start so far, and welcome back :)

    | Posted on 2010-04-02 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      I’m not much a country fan but I do listen every once and a while and from the way it looks, it looks good. Lol, I kinda gave it my own country jingle when I read it to see how it sound and it fits really well. I wouldn’t mind reading it again when you’re finished.

    | Posted on 2010-03-31 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    Summer written by layDsayD
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Bond written by saartha
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]