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    dots Submission Name: A letter to letter "A"dots
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    Author: springwaltz08
    Elite Ratio:    0.53 - 1/2/11
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsA letter to letter "A"dots
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    the first time i saw you
    is in the clinic
    when you look at me
    my world is stock upon you
    the feeling that i never feel before
    my nerves and my knees is shaking
    just want to run and give you a hug
    but suddenly i have no guts to talk to you...

    so i decided to find you
    i look from every where
    i ask my friends
    just to find you
    then suddenly when i was walking alone
    you pass me by
    but then again i was weak to approach you

    day has past minute is wasting
    i'm on every where
    around and stalking
    still here looking at you
    hoping to find me
    finding information is not an easy task

    your always in my mind
    thinking of you before sleep
    and wake up in the morning
    stock on my mind is your name....




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