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    dots Submission Name: wings of wordsdots

    Author: springwaltz08
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    Words: 191
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    dotswings of wordsdots

    I know I am foolhardy when I comfort you,
    But your tear-filled face is too beautiful and I can't help it.
    We became just a bit closer than friends,
    And you were my beloved treasure.

    To have an unbroken dream is to be fighting with oneself.
    I've fought enough to be proud of my wounds that accumulate with each day.

    Though I cannot fly to the skies, I can give you my wings.
    They will say, "You're not alone anymore",
    And the words will tear off your loneliness.
    Even pessimists can fall in love and be changed.
    If the path you have choosen reaches a dead end,
    Then why not lose yourself there.

    "The waning moon looks like a knife."
    I felt a sense of deja vu as you said that.

    In the minds of premonitions and confusion,
    I was looking for your eyes.
    In this world, where some doors can only be opened with two people.

    For some reason, we were borne with each other's wings.
    In order to face the future,
    You know love has a gift
    The Wings of Words...

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