Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: A letter to letter "A" IIdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: springwaltz08
    Elite Ratio:    0.53 - 1/2/11
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 802
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 749



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA letter to letter "A" IIdots
    -------------------------------------------


    A small flower is blooming inside my heart,
    The unwithering flower you gave to me,
    I was able to believe strongly enough in myself,
    So I'm not afraid anymore...

    I was happy meeting you,
    And proud of our holding hands,
    Even though we look up to different skies now,
    See? I can walk on my own now...

    I laugh more during sad times,
    To hide the pain I feel inside,
    But you hugged me gently without saying a thing
    I felt as if it were like opening a door frozen in ice...

    I didn't say thank you...
    I couldn't even promise...
    However, like on that day, if the wind blows
    Then I know we will surely meet again...




    Submitted on 2010-03-31 12:23:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    184165

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry