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    dots Submission Name: A letter to letter "A" IIIdots
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    Author: springwaltz08
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    dotsA letter to letter "A" IIIdots
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    the saddest thing ever to happen
    was the time that you cried when saying good bye

    I couldn't say it as words and just turned my back
    the by passing memory still doesn't fade

    if I can see you one more time
    I want to tell you my feelings from back then
    no matter how lonely a night can be, don't give up
    your dream will surely come true

    your gaze always seemed to look far away
    I felt that I wanted to protect you

    even the days that we hurt each other seem precious
    I'll never forget the fact that we believed in each other
    the more I remember, my tears won't stop
    I still want to see you after crying...




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