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    dots Submission Name: Sprinkles on my Toastdots
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    Author: WhiteTiger
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    2.88 - 17/16/11
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 581
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1254



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       For the sake of your brain don't try and figure this one out. I don't even understand it.


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    dotsSprinkles on my Toastdots
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    An aquamarine color crayon
    A broken down old mini van
    An apple tree to the right
    Painted nails, werewolf bite
    Lemon candy, crazy hair
    Wooden spoons and gummy bears
    Nazi zombies straight ahead
    Caution sign: LIVING DEAD!
    A painted picture
    Shot gun shell
    “Take this Zombie! Go to Hell!”
    Cheddar Cheese, an old Atari
    Sushi bar with Calamari!
    80’s bands with spinach dip
    Daffy duck, APOCOLYPSE!
    Rollercoaster’s and funny hats
    Old ladies with a million cats
    Teenage boys who look like girls
    Oh my god I’m gonna hurl
    Pre wrapped bacon and a Limousine
    Eiffel tower, Thai cuisine
    Silver bullets, fizzy drinks
    Ginger midgets, Italian meats
    Gum
    Blood
    Paper
    SEX!
    Flowers
    Dresses
    Cell phone?
    Text!
    Creo en los huevos de México!
    y voy a comer todo el día si se aithentico!
    Paper dreams
    fudge? Where?
    “I’m gonna wash that man right out of my hair”
    The wrath of Zeus
    The box of Pandora
    Nero’s better weapon
    Buck teeth of Cora
    OH MY! Oh God is it a ghost?
    Why yes, it is.




    Submitted on 2010-03-31 13:39:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't get the eggs from mexico but the rest of it was hirlarious...
    | Posted on 2010-03-31 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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