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    dots Submission Name: Marry Me Miley?dots
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    Author: TasteMyRainbow
    ASL Info:    17/Male/In your pants.
    Elite Ratio:    5.07 - 21/22/17
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 721
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 878



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    dotsMarry Me Miley?dots
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    Here I am.
    Itís 6 AM.
    My mind is spinning.
    With the image of us liviní


    Weíd be in our house, sharing a bed.
    Youíd never be out of my head.
    Your face,
    Baby itís prettier than lace.


    Man, I wanna hold you tillí dawn,
    So all the men will fawn.
    Brush your cheek lightly,
    Make you blush ever so slightly.


    Miley, you should marry me.
    My names Jace, letís make it be.
    Iíll give you money,
    Call you my honey.


    Iíll treat you right.
    Itís gonna be aightí
    Just shhh..


    So here I am.
    On my knees, for the last time.
    Begging and pleading.
    Wishing and missing.
    Miley Cyrus.
    Marry me?



    -Jacey
    --Shits n Giggles




    Submitted on 2010-03-31 17:22:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this might work. totally go for it. umm so long as you post the whole ordeal on youtube and send me the link. you know, just to see the happy look on your face.
    | Posted on 2011-11-03 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      ...good...luck...?
    | Posted on 2011-03-31 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Woah, this is deep stuff. Pretty much the story of my life

    I just have one suggestion - take out the question mark from the title. It should be more forcefully written, or else she won't marry you. She likes a guy who can be demanding

    I hope your proposal will be successful. Miley FTW



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    | Posted on 2010-04-09 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
      I think you have a serious mental issue.
    You should get some help for it.... It's just weird.
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 00:00:00 | by Adrienne | [ Reply to This ]


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