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    dots Submission Name: I Like You, But I Don't Love You (You Will kndots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI Like You, But I Don't Love You (You Will kndots
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    I like you
    more than you could ever know
    but my insecurities
    is hard to let go

    I have so much feelings for you
    I have so much fun when you're around
    but something inside me won't let me love you
    as strange as it sounds

    You make me laugh, you make me smile
    you protect me like a child

    We connect in so many ways
    we have so many similarities
    we even think alike
    I want to love you but my heart won't let me

    So for now please take what I can give
    until my heart finally lets go
    and I know when it does
    you will know...




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      Very nice writing, and I know exactly how that feels from both sides. This was posted a while back, hope everything ended up working out for you.
    | Posted on 2011-03-05 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write! I've been in that situation before. Its too complicated, pretty soon i gave up. But i dont think thats the right thing to do.

    Buster
    | Posted on 2010-04-02 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      I've been on the other side of this poem, the person that can't be loved just yet.... be careful.

    good poem. Keep writing :)
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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