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    dots Submission Name: Heaven Abovedots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsHeaven Abovedots
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    Some lives are to cherished to be here on earth.
    They belong in heaven among the other angels,
    with music that is peaceful and delicate as the soul.


    Some lives exist on earth as an illustration of harmony.
    Baring a love through their era desiring love to be shared,
    So the harmony of life can be continued on with others.


    Some lives are comparable to angels willing to be released.
    So they can sing gently and at long last unfold their wings,
    And make that journey to their home in the heavens above.




    Submitted on 2010-04-02 09:03:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was refreshing to read, couple of misspellings but who's perfect?
    | Posted on 2010-04-02 00:00:00 | by Cayman | [ Reply to This ]


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