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    dots Submission Name: See you Next Summerdots
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    Author: NicoleDaVinci
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 2/5/9
    Words: 308
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSee you Next Summerdots
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    Looking deep into my own eyes
    My reflection enveloped in the lake
    The sun shines from behind
    And I think of this morning's mistake
    No, not a mistake, but a sudden confession
    Elaborating on my feelings for you,
    My obsession
    I told you of my dreams of our future
    Where it was you and me, without (s her)
    You didn't speak, for a while
    And a while turned to a long time, of no words said
    And my heart grew heavy, like it had been filled with lead
    You left me, turned your back
    Said you had to think things through
    And at that moment my mind was filled with qualms of losing you
    Which leads me here, to where I sit and sigh
    The lake I stare into, filling with the tears I cry
    I'm almost about to give up, and refuse to think of those words I know I meant
    When a sudden touch fills me with shock and (I Wonderment)
    It is your touch, those large hands,I would know them anywhere
    Though I would expect them anywhere but here
    My eyes find your own, and I'm am in awe of the vision of what I see
    I'm starting to think that this is a dream
    Especially when you say these words to me
    "(B Yes, I feel the same way as you)"
    It's hard to believe that it's true
    What a surprise, you'd leave everything behind and take me up on my offer
    I never knew, something so simple
    Could bring such pleasure.
    Something as simple as your hands holding me tightly
    The sun is setting now, and I just think
    I love you, and you love me
    You are mine, no matter how hard it may be to believe.
    Except for the fact, this was just another summer night's dream




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