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    dots Submission Name: Flooded Memoriesdots

    Author: janedoe92
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Lostfriend
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       A poem about an old best friend who I was in love with.

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    dotsFlooded Memoriesdots

    I stare out my window
    Rain falling down from up high
    Memories flooding back
    Me you and a cold winter night

    I remember many things
    Mostly smiles, laughs and frozen ears
    I was light and happy in those times
    Your opinion was the only one to hear

    Then I found out I was moving
    Broke my heart to see your pain
    Especially since I knew I was the cause
    Said goodbye with tears in our eyes and cheeks stained

    We stayed in touch for two years to come
    Best friends forever distance couldn't part
    We talked all the time, everyday
    You were always in my heart

    Now I don't know what happened
    I sit here alone and broken
    Wathing rain fall from high above
    Wishing we had never spoken

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