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    dots Submission Name: Liarsdots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLiarsdots
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    Liars; the world wants them so
    They're so better than us:
    Those who trust our soul.
    Shrouded in darkness and hate
    They're bound to take everything
    Liars; so perfectly impure.

    Shape thyself with the darkness
    wear the mask covered in blood
    Liars; I am you
    Liars; you're all bound to hell
    Liars; you're the number one
    Liars; let this time fall.

    I'll never understand the passage of time.
    But I do see how the favoritism goes
    Liars; you have them all
    liars; they'll always be on the knees
    liars; you're number one

    And I'll always be the imperfectly pure one
    Who walks this road on the lonely path of..
    honestly and moral.




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      Everything you write, I can relate to.
    If I understand you are talikng about most people in this crazy world. The ones that feel the need to put on a show so others will approve. I too chose to be me, I refuse to conform, or try to impress others. I refuse to be anything but me!!!!! You have to be a kindred spirit, smart, wierd, probly sarcastic. Opinonated, artistic, a real person. I may have described me, or maybe I am just a [censored].
    Either way I'm here, so I'm going with the flow,making friends, enemys, and just meeting wierdos!
    Peace,Love&craziness
    The Kidd
    | Posted on 2010-04-06 00:00:00 | by mistiekidd | [ Reply to This ]


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