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Author:	Hazel eyes Jess
ASL Info:	23/female/new york
Elite Ratio:	3.14 - 70/74/29
Words:	79

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	506
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Let him love you like you dreamed he would,
Make him love you like you wished he could.
Let him hold you, let him stare
Let him know how much you care
Let him kiss you,never lie
Don't ever let him say goodbye
Show eachother how to live
Give him all you have to give
Let him need you more each day
Assured that everythings okay
Open up your heart and mind
Surely it's true love you'll find <3

Submitted on 2010-04-04 21:46:11 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I agree totally with Lynn7. Such a lovely, pure write. I love how it seems to give so much, in so little words. Keep it up.
| Posted on 2010-04-05 00:00:00 | by hollowshell | [ Reply to This ]
One of the most beautiful poems I've read in a while.
Very profound, but yet so simple.
Love and Peace,

| Posted on 2010-04-04 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.