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    dots Submission Name: Riding in cars with boys. Or girls.dots
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    Author: EEKS
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    dotsRiding in cars with boys. Or girls.dots
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    It will be that car rides I remember years from now, when I am settling down and I find myself
    trying to make money and rarely painting just because and maybe I won't be dancing in kitchens or camping out on friends floors anymore. If that is, in fact, what growing up means.
    It will be the times he drove me home, stopping on the side of endless dirt roads to lay me down in the back seat or the times ten of us got into a car build for four and sat on laps and sang until our throats hurt.
    I thought I would be on an endless road trip to nowhere but now I've stopped the car and I wonder if there is any gas or motivation to get it going again.




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