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    dots Submission Name: Freedomdots
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    Author: MysterydarkPoet
    ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157/295/173
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 1045
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsFreedomdots
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    I could wake,
    let it crash and fall
    toss, turn & burn
    every inch of my skin
    till there's nothing left at all.
    could lay and admit defeat
    between the sun and his fleet
    sink and drift for years,
    wake up lost & never found
    leave the good and drink the bad
    but the cups empty and rolls on the floor
    cause it's this taste of freedom
    & it's not bittersweet at all.




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