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    dots Submission Name: Borrow from Lifedots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 23/161/138
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBorrow from Lifedots
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    Some die by fire
    Some go in their sleep
    Some get exhausted
    Swimming out in the deep

    Some struck by lightning
    Some fall to the ground
    Some are on the wrong end
    Of a live firing round

    Some hang from a noose
    Some end their life drugged
    Some upset the wrong people
    And end up getting rubbed

    Some die on the road
    Some leave on a plane
    Some can't quite handle
    All of life's pain

    If I had to go
    Lose my life today
    Please take it quickly
    What's the best way?

    I'm not afraid to die
    And I'm not afraid to live
    But sometimes I feel I've
    Seen all life has to give

    It always takes back what's best




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