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    dots Submission Name: Meaning of a Rose (repost)dots

    Author: t0_eazy
    ASL Info:    26/M/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 118/123/41
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMeaning of a Rose (repost)dots

    A rose is given by a person,
    Who knows theyíre in the wrong.
    A rose is given by a man,
    To further things along.
    It seems the true meaning of itís purpose,
    Has faded over time.
    And I am here to tell you,
    Thatís why I pen this rhyme.
    The Rose is a symbol of true love,
    A simple, unspoken bond.
    Yet many of us tend to see,
    A relationship magic wand.
    So if youíve read this once or twice,
    And still canít understand.
    You must have never had your heart,
    In the palm of someoneís hand.
    But do not fret, all is not lost.
    Because you will someday meet,
    The only person that you feel,
    Could make your life complete.
    And when you wish to be near them,
    In every waking hour.
    You will finally comprehend,
    The true meaning of this flower.

    Submitted on 2010-04-05 08:39:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      flowers have a lot of meanings your right. I think that the subject is very true, but not just to flowers but the very concept of love, people have diluted it so much to the point were "I love you" is used on the first meeting.

    I think that you should continue to use this subject, and this style is very good. You were able to use rhymes well.

    Keep Writing :)
    | Posted on 2010-04-06 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful writing. Just make sure to take care of your rose, for they are delicate and can wither way.
    Love and Peace,
    | Posted on 2010-04-06 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow I really liked this, I think you've captured love in a beautiful way by manifesting it's purpose with a flower. Thanks for sharing :)
    | Posted on 2010-04-05 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]

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