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    dots Submission Name: Or a Poke in the Eye with a Blunt Stickdots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 427
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    How strange does it seem
    If strangeness was a part
    And something which the strange considered
    Worth counting

    Itís a question
    Which has fraught the pickle of a peach
    A conundrum
    Which may have born some worthy contemplation
    But seems to have laxed of somewhat late
    Like melting liquorice
    All down the those institutional fronts
    With gooey ignored senses of conscience
    Strange was a melting ice cream cone

    But still itís a question
    Niggling at your teeth look over sweet chewing gum
    All Bazooka Joe
    And the bubbles you blow
    Burst with sticky un-washable plastic
    All over your nice clean clothes
    Those irksome reminders
    With little beads of troublesomes
    To tangle in your hair

    How strange does it seem
    If strangeness was a part
    Of anything
    And something which strange considered
    Worth continuing

    Tell me then please
    If strangeness it is
    What it is
    To describe something like this

    To describe life as being shit
    Yes shit
    But lets get on with it
    Lifeís a bitch
    But hey, lets get on with it
    Life is hell
    As we all know so very well
    But lets get on with it

    And this
    This is life ?
    This is your universal God given right

    Is it ?Ņ

    To describe life as being shit

    How strange does it seem
    If strangeness was a part
    And something which the strange considered
    Worth counting

    That the description of this miracle

    Could be summed up in a term so colloquial as

    Shit

    And yet

    This is the prevalent attitude
    Of the attitude
    Which demeans it
    Life
    Is shit

    How many times have you, yourself said it

    Life
    Is shit

    How strange does it seem
    If strangeness was a part
    And something which the strange considered
    Worth counting
    How strange does it seem
    If strangeness was a part
    Of anything
    And something which strange considered
    Worth continuing

    Tell me then please
    If strangeness it is
    What it is
    To describe something so miraculous
    As this
    As shit

    What kind of sickness is it
    Could bury us so deep

    But still itís a question
    Which may drag you from your complacent cocoons
    And fill your heads with questionable
    Nonsense

    This one thing that you have
    This one thing you own
    This solitary
    Unquestionable
    Miracle
    Is
    Just
    Shit
    Isnít
    It

    What more excuse
    Could anyone need or warrant
    For running away
    And hiding from the truth




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