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    dots Submission Name: Sexual Torquedots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsSexual Torquedots
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    I am strung to a beat of sexual air
    Which folds upon all the cascades of her

    The torque of coils bind this
    A perpetration of wanting
    Shivers
    Colliding through my blood

    This participation of ropes
    And naked forms the supplicant moans
    Charges; slow to the velvet push
    Wrists pulled to the arch of her

    Trembles in every inch the symphonies cry
    This height these orchestras play, but never touch

    Only now the desperate quiver
    To hands which clasp
    Feeding tenderness through their hunger
    And sign on skin their need to devour

    A publicity of wanton wench
    And eyes to drown each fevered kiss
    Lays a struggling call to taken and take
    On every bound knot of pleading

    Make me burn to her
    In this dark set embodied cloak

    I have no will, except to her will, my will
    There is only continuance sexual torque
    Flirting with rape
    With these perspirations, these perpetrations of rope

    While lips are claws
    Whiplash straggled in tousled hair
    To the final rush of heat collapsed
    The satisfaction of each otherís breathless

    I am strung to a beat of sexual air
    Which folds upon all the cascades of her





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