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    dots Submission Name: Narisdots
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    Author: emoxday
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 113/123/144
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Dark
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    dotsNarisdots
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    The coercive being that formed his thoughts remained intact. Nothing could overcome the destructive force of the specter. Annihilation was his root of prevalence; he could not be hindered. Naris, phantom of omniscience, was eminently tarnished. He caused a grievance to anyone beneath him. Although flesh and soul alike this posed no distinction between existence or slumber.




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