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    dots Submission Name: The Next Automaton dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 281
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    A well-practiced smirk eased the recompense
    Children have no grasp
    They are to be tolerated in their innocence

    And if they should grow into the joke
    This thing of petty mind
    Called adulthood
    It will be with applause of the crowds idiot laugh

    ‘Tis but the maniacal grin of acceptance
    The usual cud chew of sheep
    The life of parental vicariousness
    In which to live instead

    They are to be tolerated in their innocence
    Children have no grasp
    A well-practiced smirk eases the recompense

    And for all their questions
    They are replied with adverts
    Faces of such mesmerist banality and confounding illusions
    As to falsify the perceptive minds of children

    Children know nothing
    They are merely playing and playful into the hands
    Where the meat grinder turns
    Churning out, new adult worms

    A well-practiced smirk eased the recompense
    Children have no grasp
    They are to be tolerated in their innocence

    Children should not think for themselves
    Lest they stray from the code and beadle de beep of normality
    These things of petty mind
    Are so important

    Teach them then the melody of this idiot laugh
    The safety of acceptance in sheep chewing cud
    They will be the bright shining epitome
    Of every sanity slick sheen, and this is how life is meant to be, advert

    They are to be tolerated in their innocence
    Children have no grasp
    A well-practiced smirk eases the recompense

    ‘Tis but the maniacal grin of acceptance
    The usual cud chew of sheep
    ‘Tis but the life
    Of the life in parental vicariousness
    In which to live instead





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