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    dots Submission Name: If anything, then nothing.dots
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    Author: Urisen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Netherlands
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 27/34/32
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Longing
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    dotsIf anything, then nothing.dots
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    Ask me not, who I am.
    Do away with what you think.
    Allow time to prove you wrong.

    Again and again.
    Admire the confusion,
    Lying at your feet
    in admiration,
    of your insanity.

    If you understand.
    Give me a call?




    Submitted on 2010-04-08 11:52:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a quiet and very sweet call for acceptance, and it really spoke to me. I love how simple it is. not everything needs to sound flowery or use bigs words,
    and you managed to create an impacting statement with only a few lines.

    -C
    | Posted on 2010-04-08 00:00:00 | by CourtneyLynne | [ Reply to This ]


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