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    dots Submission Name: Fight Dog Fighting Dot Comdots
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    Author: Mimicked
    ASL Info:    28, Male, Portland
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 10/0/15
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Rant/Satire
    Total Views: 394
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 176



    Description:
       I'm trying to be funny, but I'm not sure if it's working... I'd love to be told how not funny (of funny) it is...

    thanks friends!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsFight Dog Fighting Dot Comdots
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    Okay, follow this link to my blog and let me know if you think this is at all humorous! Thanks

    http://mebeingmased.blogspot.com/2010/03/dog-fighting-dot-com.html




    Submitted on 2010-04-08 15:45:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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