Ode to le Lune
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Ode to le Lune
The moon shines high above me Illuminating the night Dispersing the constant darkness Eradicating all the fright She shimmers ever brightly A silvery spectre from which one can't hide With the raw power of a goddess That can even calm the tide Le lune is all around me Enlightening my path Feeling for my loss Yet feeling my wrath For just as inconstant the moon My love proves to be In my dreams she's there with me But when I wake she flees To la luna I say this That I may never slumber: "May you shine on me throughout the night Lest my heart leave me encumbered." This way my love shall be like light That can never go dim Through the darkness it will glow Until a new day begins |
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| i like this. its clever and flows nicely but its not ooover prosey and painstaking to read. im not a fan of this style of writing but i think you did great with this peice and even the shakspearean vibe added a nice touch. well done. "For just as inconstant the moon My love proves to be In my dreams she's there with me But when I wake she flees" | Posted on 2010-04-12 00:00:00 | by Theophilus | [ Reply to This ] | |
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