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    dots Submission Name: Ode to le Lunedots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsOde to le Lunedots
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    The moon shines high above me
    Illuminating the night
    Dispersing the constant darkness
    Eradicating all the fright
    She shimmers ever brightly
    A silvery spectre from which one can't hide
    With the raw power of a goddess
    That can even calm the tide

    Le lune is all around me
    Enlightening my path
    Feeling for my loss
    Yet feeling my wrath
    For just as inconstant the moon
    My love proves to be
    In my dreams she's there with me
    But when I wake she flees

    To la luna I say this
    That I may never slumber:
    "May you shine on me throughout the night
    Lest my heart leave me encumbered."
    This way my love shall be like light
    That can never go dim
    Through the darkness it will glow
    Until a new day begins




    Submitted on 2010-04-10 12:25:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this. its clever and flows nicely but its not ooover prosey and painstaking to read. im not a fan of this style of writing but i think you did great with this peice and even the shakspearean vibe added a nice touch. well done.

    "For just as inconstant the moon
    My love proves to be
    In my dreams she's there with me
    But when I wake she flees"
    | Posted on 2010-04-12 00:00:00 | by Theophilus | [ Reply to This ]


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