Ode to le Lune -------------------------------------------
The moon shines high above me
Illuminating the night
Dispersing the constant darkness
Eradicating all the fright
She shimmers ever brightly
A silvery spectre from which one can't hide
With the raw power of a goddess
That can even calm the tide
Le lune is all around me
Enlightening my path
Feeling for my loss
Yet feeling my wrath
For just as inconstant the moon
My love proves to be
In my dreams she's there with me
But when I wake she flees
To la luna I say this
That I may never slumber:
"May you shine on me throughout the night
Lest my heart leave me encumbered."
This way my love shall be like light
That can never go dim
Through the darkness it will glow
Until a new day begins
i like this. its clever and flows nicely but its not ooover prosey and painstaking to read. im not a fan of this style of writing but i think you did great with this peice and even the shakspearean vibe added a nice touch. well done.
"For just as inconstant the moon
My love proves to be
In my dreams she's there with me
But when I wake she flees"
Submission Name: Ode to le Lune
