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    dots Submission Name: Children of Kalashnikov Culturedots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
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    dotsChildren of Kalashnikov Culturedots
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    What more demonstrative proof
    Could there be
    Of a profoundly sick confused culture
    And a psychotic mindless society
    Which gives its children
    Toy guns
    And other plastic weapons
    To play with

    Might as well give them the bullets
    As birthday and Christmas presents

    What measure of civilisation
    Could claim to be cognizant
    To any recognition of its own madness
    Its own Insanity
    Sold with the full version of sound effects

    Why not just sell them little capsules of blood
    And stick on wounds
    We already sell them the uniforms

    All wrapped up and repacked
    We sell them by the millions
    Dazzling shiny objects of multiple mass destruction
    So why not sell them little models of H bombs
    Cardboard cutouts of mushroom clouds

    So this is parental guidance
    The shame of humanity
    Sold at Toys R Us
    And the next generation of murder and wars acceptance

    How demonstratively sick can a society get

    But thatís ok
    Killing each other is a part of life
    Isnít it






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