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    dots Submission Name: I'm Never Gonna (Rant #2)dots
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    Author: Shadowstar13
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    dotsI'm Never Gonna (Rant #2)dots
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    I'm never gonna understand this.
    Then again, I'm never gonna understand you.
    Your life is falling, and you can't stoop below yourself
    to pick up the pieces or even fetch the glue.
    When your little shattered porcelain life is beyond duct tape, you have a problem.

    In this red blaze of blood, I've decided to choose the bitch route.
    I can't play fucking martyr my whole life (I think I do practicing heretic much better)
    and life would be lovely if only if only
    this house was all empty like a museum of forgotten strife.

    Life would be lovely if only if only

    My days are great until I step through that doorway.

    You can't deem to decree a recall of the fall,
    You don't dare criticise this unholy hall.
    Your egos take up all the oxygen-
    You should really look into penicillin
    or perhaps poison will stunt this growth
    that toxifies everything you touch, everyone you know.
    You think you act so perfectly? You're a fucking little girl in dungarees
    a little bitch who can't please and is never pleased
    a Mean Girl jock who wouldn't know life
    if it came in through the window and set you alight

    "i am not prepared for you
    let me retrieve the scalpel"

    Rip me, strip me of my rank and name, leave me in rags with throbbing memories of my dam's labor pain
    Abuse this muse if you so care
    because karma isn't going anywhere

    the truth isn't going anywhere

    Are you afraid that's what I'll say?
    I'm acting like an ass? At least I've got an excuse-
    what's the explanation for you,
    two tamed household shrew
    lying in a cage
    with nothing but a despot's rage
    to split between the two of you?




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      I love the enraged disgust of this. It reminds me of that line from Delores Claiborne:

    "Sometimes being a [censored] is all a woman has to hold onto."

    I can't believe Stephen (Cokehead) King came up with that one on his own, do you?
    | Posted on 2010-04-22 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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