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    dots Submission Name: love you.dots
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    Author: PoeticNonsense
    ASL Info:    20/f/around
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 205/215/100
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 740
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    Bytes: 623



    Description:
        my roommate is high.


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    dotslove you.dots
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    i'm glad that you're asleep
    right now
    because i
    can write poetry on you.
    the things i can't tell you to your face
    i tell to
    your stomach and your arms and your back.
    i write words to you that
    my brain won't let me say.
    i'm falling with you.
    there's a certain thrill
    in this uncertainty.
    i wonder secretly
    to myself if you wait until
    i'm asleep to write your own words
    on me. i know
    you know i'm crazy. but do you know that
    i think i--




    Submitted on 2010-04-11 14:08:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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