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    dots Submission Name: the real phonydots
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    Author: PoeticNonsense
    ASL Info:    20/f/around
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 205/215/100
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsthe real phonydots
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    mulberry-stained streets kiss the
    souls of my shoes.
    i've got no plans to follow in those
    fatally famous footsteps. everything
    and nothing all in one hellbent day;
    tonight we climb out of our solemn ceremony crypts.

    this is what Iíve been waiting for.
    Reality slaps my face and screams,
    "wake up!"
    into my undeafended ear.
    Too many cooks in the kitchen spoil the shrew.

    i wanted to bundle You up poor pure sweet baby and pull You away and
    hold You so close
    so nobody could hurt You.
    i guess it's the things that we don't do that define us in the end.




    Submitted on 2010-04-11 18:24:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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