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Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Rabid hook toothed panther gnash sable nightmare reigns underneath busted trees stabbing the sky
Amazon thick laced viper death cliff
Quick manticore red drip mask closing eyes
Glare vigilant naked wet piercingly frozen square blade beast fist stare yellow
Girl lost scared mutilated silver slash glint
Soaked bleed wind burst drink tip rock spigot
Nimble limp death wish sparkling camouflage thundering roar beat crack hiss
Mouth ecstatic racing phonetic
Core attack choking volt
Electricity flame loud scream rapid

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