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    dots Submission Name: From grieving to emptydots
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    Author: metallichick786
    ASL Info:    26/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 78/85/51
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Death
    Total Views: 828
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 82



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    dotsFrom grieving to emptydots
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    Pain silencing life
    Time sealing all wisdom cold
    Disappear in death




    Submitted on 2010-04-11 21:10:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this one speaks to me
    | Posted on 2011-03-06 00:00:00 | by Diablo Tapitio | [ Reply to This ]
      I just hate seeing this excellent Haiku with no comments. I think the reason is, everyone is uncomfortable about thoughts of death or their own mortality. I've been nearly dead eight times, and have had one near death experience.

    This short Haiku speaks volumes about a difficult subject, where physical being ceases and spiritual existence commences.
    | Posted on 2011-01-23 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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