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    dots Submission Name: Man ?dots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 432
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMan ?dots

    Football fanatic and football violence
    And proud of it
    Boxing rings
    And screaming yer ! smack that fuckers head in ! kill him !
    Ever larger penis inflated faster cars
    The beer swilling raucous din
    Of were all men together
    We are

    Nah; sorry, just not me

    Rough and tumble
    And gadgets full of muscles
    Bars full of strippers and tits and fannies
    Great big well-hung elephants of sex
    Yep !
    All slapping each other back

    Sorry, just not me

    Unemotional and aloof
    A criminal and policeman
    A rattle one off the chain for vengeance
    Pop a cap in that motherfuckers ass
    A die hard
    A yippe kiy yay
    Of all sweat and confidence

    Nope; sorry just not me

    Feet in the fridge
    And whats more important is the next season and the next session
    The next round of wrestling and W.M.B.A
    Magazine with intricate details
    Of survival techniques
    S.A.S secrets
    Weapons and how to load them
    And I wish my girlfriend had bigger breasts
    Maybe shed go for a boob job

    Sorry, just not me

    Big manly four wheeler monster trucks
    And anything, which can crush your head
    And God is a man, isnt he
    He ignores his wife
    While watching T.V

    No, sorry, in that case God, is not me

    Sexual Olympians and sexual performance
    Yer fuck that bitch
    Show her whos boss
    You are a stuff that cock in her mouth
    Sexual engine
    And great, call her baby
    Tell her maybe
    And then go and fuck someone else

    Sorry; just not me

    Be all sporty and hang glider technology
    Join the mobilised infantry
    Masturbate your way into a life of pornography
    Be the ideal
    Of religious supremacy
    Be the man
    The man
    You are
    The man

    Oh please, not again, this is just not me

    Be dominant
    Be afraid of homosexuals
    But simply love the idea of lesbians ( dont you wish your wife was one )
    Dont change diapers
    Dont change clothes
    Expect your dinner to be on the table
    Never hang out the washing
    Never vacuum the carpet
    Dont ever sleep in the wet patch

    Be a mindless pig of every worst aspect
    Of what it means
    To be a

    And me

    I have no idea
    What a man should be
    But I know what I am
    I am me
    As defined by my gender only
    I am

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