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    Author: Bloodlust86
    ASL Info:    24/F/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 56/49/53
    Words: 466
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
    Total Views: 832
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2307



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    I cant understand how you expect me to put my feelings on the back burner, wouldn't it of been better if I had never brought them up? To you everything is fine but me i'm hurting like CRAZY but i cant let you know... you bring the best out in me you make me do things i never dreamed i could do... you provide the support i need in order to feel great, you said someday we could open the door again, how long do u expect me to wait? i guess i just want or need to know what your true feelings are. i mean i know you don't want to ruin your anything with your best friend and you don't want to lose his friendship. i understand that i just don't know how you can go and face a day knowing you feel the way you do about me and hide it. when your around us both doesn't something tug at you... i guess what hurts the most is i know now what its like to have you, i know the butterflies when you call me baby and it something i wanted yo keep and now that its gone its lonely... one day you'll look back and wonder what if, what if i never let her walk away like that... i know i told you the feelings are not going anywhere and they wont.. i just cant promise i wont move on... i cant wait around forever on something that someday may happen.. i've been there before and its miserable. i know your feelings for me are real.. i know you are yourself around me.. i see sides of you most people never will and i know you see me the way most people don't. but you know as well as i do as long as hes in the picture we will never be able to be us... he would never approve it or accept it.. he gets mad if i message you first or if i talk to you more. if he found out we text each other he would flip a gasscet. maybe i should of never developed feeling for you although i couldn't control it. i thought i had found me and i was happy and i am.. when your around. i guess i never told you any of this so its coming out now.

    if i need yo smile
    all i need is to hear your voice
    if i need some comfort
    all i need is to see you smile
    if i need to cry
    all i need is you to be there
    if i need to live
    all i need is you in my life
    my everything began with you
    my nothing began when i lost you.




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