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    dots Submission Name: Can Lovedots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsCan Lovedots
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    Can love be wider than the shore
    Or deeper than the sea
    Is it brighter than the shining moon
    That glows incessantly
    Can love be stronger than the tide
    That rages with such ease
    And can it be so gentle
    As a summer morning breeze

    Can love be warmer than the sun
    Or a fire raging so
    Is it stronger than the hardest stone
    That was laid, so long ago
    Can love be sweeter than the scent
    Of flowers in the spring
    And can it almost always set
    The coldest heart to sing

    Can love span all the universe
    Or reach into our soul
    Is it with us when we live and die
    To make us, forever whole
    Can love be each and everything
    To determine what will be
    And can it stand the test of time
    For all eternity

    Can love be autumn colours
    Or the purest winter snow
    Is it flowers in the springtime
    With an evening summer glow
    Can love be but the greatest truth
    To stand forever tall
    And can it be so perfect as
    The greatest gift of all











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      hello Frank its been awhile and i am so glad to see this piece. i love it as i for one hope that love is all of the above mentioned i think i mostly hope that is does live on even after we die after recently losing my grandmother to lukemia i would like to think that her love surrounds me in a comforting blanket because she know how much i hurt and miss her
    as well as my other grandmother who just past on tuesday of lung cancer so i would hope that they feel my love through time and space thank you very much for posting this i love it as always.....Joy
    | Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      This is outstanding, and I think among your best, although you have many outstanding poems!

    This excellent poem puts in words what many of us feel about love; it manifests the old saying "love conquers all", and "above all, there is love"!

    Love can make a silent heart sing, and give it wings to fly!

    This is just really, really good, Frank!!!!
    | Posted on 2010-04-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      “Love is patient; love is kind
    and envies no one.
    Love is never boastful, nor conceited, nor rude;
    never selfish, not quick to take offense.
    There is nothing love cannot face;
    there is no limit to its faith,
    its hope, and endurance.
    In a word, there are three things
    that last forever: faith, hope, and love;
    but the greatest of them all is love.”
    -1 Corinthians

    Love is the greatest power we mere mortals know.
    So, in answer to your poem's questions:
    Yes, love can.
    | Posted on 2010-04-12 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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