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Confusion


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 63
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Description:




Confusion



Converter
Slide manufacture lens coordination
Connect facilities subterranean
Never remember
Winter


Transportation
Bathhouses Candace Carnage left us
Creative
Momentous
Denial
Confusion


Letting
The bleed
Romantic
Systematic
Alert


Distress
Slamming
Bursting symmetrical
Subconscious boil
Gorgeous Aiden
Tearing deceit
Death
Inside


Remission
Recovery
Floating
Holding
Saving


Cascades
Okanagan
Silver
Mountain








Submitted on 2010-04-14 15:08:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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