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    dots Submission Name: The Men Who Invented Helldots

    Author: col13x
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    dotsThe Men Who Invented Helldots

    What a sorry, sad state affairs
    We, the human race, and the world
    Are in

    For 1700 years we have been preached
    Taught and indoctrinated
    With the principals and capitals
    Of heaven and hell

    And hell; is all, we have created

    For 1700 years
    We have been bought and sold
    To a complete and total

    For centuries these falsehoods proliferated
    Through fear and ignorance
    And ignorance and fear perpetuated
    Through the ever more clever
    Media of subliminal messages
    Piled upon our insignificance
    By entertainment

    God and the Devil
    Projections of capitalism
    Systems of reward and punishment
    And our ever eternal soul and spirit, forfeit

    1700 years of drudgery and slavery
    Of constructed wars for profit and money
    Patriotisms, which keep us divided
    Simply for the competition of their market

    The philosophy of death
    Is the hell invented
    To deny us the life
    To which we were all intended

    And there is a tragedy written here
    A tragedy of lives and blood
    Of sacrifices
    Mothers and father and children have written
    Through 17 centuries
    The hope and heroism
    Of the common people struggling to understand
    And by their hearts
    Do the right thing

    In answer to a lie
    Created by the men who invented hell

    And if such a grand and monumental picture
    Can be painted
    With the backstab of a falsehood


    What could humanity do
    What could we, do
    With the truth

    The truth is
    Profit and loss of banks
    Created 300 years of Negro slavery
    The war of independence
    The great depression
    World war one
    World war two
    And every international conflict
    Since then

    And while you, you as an individual
    Continue to believe
    In the prefabricated bullshit
    Of religious and political leaders
    Who owe no allegiance other than to
    And banks

    You will continue to be
    Your own worst weapon
    In the perpetuation
    Of the lie

    You will continue to sell your daughters and sons
    And wonder why
    Humanity fell
    To the men who created

    What greater, unreasoning stupidity can there be
    What small mind of small reality
    On a tiny planet filled with arrogance
    Self importance before the Universe
    To think or believe
    That a persons death
    Ends anything

    But by the fear of death
    You are all

    Your fear

    And a bondage you hand in perpetuity
    To our children

    Every ounce
    Every snippet
    Every moment
    Of our world culture
    Is a denial

    And to deny life

    You will continue to sell your daughters and sons
    And wonder why
    Humanity fell
    To the men who created

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