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    dots Submission Name: Blue eyes and soft curlsdots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       A quick piece, while I was listening to a song from the piano.


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    dotsBlue eyes and soft curlsdots
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    Storms, they rage outside without a calm in sight
    The lightning strikes down on the earth
    Shattering the silence in my world.
    A cold and dead world; a world without you.
    A black void consumes my soul as I stare out the window
    Tears rolling down my...

    Silence. A momentary calm has passed by
    Another second, and you'll soon fly
    away? Without a trace.
    I sink my head into a pillow
    drown out my muffled cries
    Despair strikes me hard
    Silence now, little one.
    Time is wasting, right?

    But I still believe in a beautiful day.
    I still believe the skies aren't gray
    But it's so hard to make sense of all this
    when you're not here, by me

    But I won't give up
    I won't failter
    I'll stand up and fight
    Even if I can only cry
    Fight I must, cause I believe, I believe..
    That one day you'll be back by my side.

    Should I swallow my pride and just give up?
    Should I erase all the memories I had of you?
    I don't like to think so, because...
    I love you.

    Just pass away, storm.
    Disappear and leave me be.

    Tomorrow it'll be a beautiful day.
    One worth living again
    Such a beautiful day,
    such a beautiful gaze
    Blue eyes, blue eyes, and soft curls
    Stare down at me from across the road.
    Lonely? It's just my own reflection.

    I'm not alone. Not alone.




    Submitted on 2010-04-16 12:04:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      For some reason this strikes me as more of a song than a poem. I hope you like Country music and that I am not offending you by saying so, but I thought immediately of Garth Brooks' "No Fences" which I listened to many a moon ago on cassette (rofl). The first song is "The Thunder Rolls", and, in case you have never heard it, begins with a sound of thunder and hard rain, which my Dad and I used to crank in the new car when Mom wasn't around.

    I actually didn't read the description to start, and now that I look at it, I'm not surprised you wrote this with music in the background. Though the words are slightly cliché, they are carried off well with a subtle flow that would suit music well.

    soul-hugger
    | Posted on 2010-04-16 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]


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