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    dots Submission Name: The Day Beforedots
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    Author: Darkest Flaw
    ASL Info:    21/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 208/287/108
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Day Beforedots
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    Greedily your eyes absorb me
    into another epic siege
    of heart over thoughts matter
    where emotions bleed in mindless splatter
    to disrupt the lines of love life's pattern
    & drown me in an endless dream.

    Master strings connect, like a respirator
    to drag me across death's equator
    and leave me in another time of when
    blinded by the ink flowed pen
    & entranced entirely by your final hymn
    as if you were born from our creator.

    Ashes illuminated by tired moonlight
    dancing as shadows of morning spite
    cursed to live a life of cons
    & display my hopes for when I'm gone
    to that pasture with a greener lawn
    and be freed of a life for love that lied.

    Greedily your eyes absorb me
    into their depthless sea
    of emotions bled for mindless matter
    to subdue the heartbeats endless spatter
    disconnecting a neurons final scatter
    and drown me in an endless dream.




    Submitted on 2010-04-19 20:28:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Impressive, when you mentioned strings connect- a puppet came to my mind. But your expressions are excellent especially when you repeated your intro but substituted words. Thats mastery for me. Keep it deep! Up you.
    | Posted on 2010-04-20 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]


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