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Lets Sway.


Author: YC013
ASL Info:    21/F/TN
Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 16 /12 /19
Words: 51
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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About an ex-boyfriend who is still in my life as a friend.


Lets Sway.



You're not some boy who can be swayed
But you should sway back my way
Promise I'll be true
I won't be a fool
Your swagger is fine
Your tunes are tight
We used to have wild fun times
Live for the moment, and start our journey on this midsummer night.




Submitted on 2010-04-21 11:34:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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