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If to die without

Author: Jay92
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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If to die without

Whole we can be.
I wanna love,live.

Beautiful we'll live.
Beautiful we'll die.
A new we can be.
A part we can not.
Together let us be.
Together I want us to stay.

Don't pull away.
Don't sleep without me.
I'll make my bed.
I'll make it with you.
For death won't win.
For our love is to strong.
A time, it may keep us apart.
A time will come when that ends.
Time is an allusion.
Time is no obstacle.
Love is forever.
Love conquers all.

Hope is our love.
Love is our hope.
Our memories are lasting.
Our memories are soft.
Softly they feel.
Softly they sit, wait.

Hold me.
Hold you.
Love me.
I'll love you.

To die with out.
To die before life.

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