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Slime


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 34
Class/Type: Lyrics /Passion
Total Views: 655
Average Vote:    1.0000
Bytes: 258



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Slime



Slime
The fist of a hurricane
Killing time with a hand grenade
Playing russian roulette with a proximity mine
Brandishing my brain
Selling sexx on an airline
Fuck
Let's steal money






Submitted on 2010-04-22 01:19:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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