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    dots Submission Name: White Dodge Truckdots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    Never dreamed I'd come back to you.
    The one who helped me develop these fears. The person I first said "i love you" to
    till the night i refound love in a white dodge truck
    Underneath a full, innocent december moon You never knew.
    You had me then the night i refound love. . . In your white dodge truck looking into your soft baby blues i'll never forget. . .
    You were wearing them damn boots
    Holding my child as if she was yours you Made a silent vow to always be true this time. . .
    You were stayin for good
    The night i refound love in a white dodge truck
    Underneath a full, innocent december moon. You never knew it
    But you had me then
    The night you vowed to never leave again. The night you gained back my heart.
    In your white dodge truck. . .




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      pretty good i have to admit
    | Posted on 2010-04-23 00:00:00 | by monkiigirl | [ Reply to This ]


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